Proofreading

6 Apr

In recessionary times, luxuries such as proofreading are often the first things cut from the budget. I’m sure a price-per-word supplier could have looked over these two lines. It is the store front after all. Especially pertinent, seeing as shop owners surely don’t want to encourage passers-by to use crowbars on their store.

"I can't explain it, Al; even though we both know they don't carry cash in there, something inside me just HAS to come back here tonight and prise this place rite open."

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